May 3rd, 2017 at 06:22am
This. Omg, this.
I cannot even explain to you how much I really, really, really loved this. Logan is my favorite, and this whole thing just lvjasovjaes;iovjae;oraevj;rofj;lca. I couldn't even form actual words when I read this. I still can't omg.
I. Love. This. Such a good, good job. Thank you for entering this. XD <3
I liked that this was sort of just a stand-alone story. I know some of your other ones were all connected/took place in the same type of story, but this one was just on it's own and it almost felt like the characters were a tad bit different because of it. The same people, obviously, but tweaked a little bit and it was interesting to see that.
Like always, your descriptions were really consistent and well developed. You choose really lovely ways to word thing, like comparing her body to a pinball machine. You always create such cool and interesting images out of simple things and it's really fun to read them. Even throughout the smutty parts, you keep the descriptions up to the standard that the rest of the story is and I really appreciate that.
And of course, you write Kandi and Logan's chemistry really well. You can tell they always love each other, or want each other, or both, and it's really great to read such a pure relationship like that.
Thanks for entering!