August 20th, 2014 at 09:23pm
This is the first story I have read on Mibba about a mental institute that actually tortures it's' guests. I love the concept, it is really unique and creative. The detail in the story is descriptive and I love your guys writing style.
I also like how you have written the main characters, especially the main protagonist. She is such a sweetie, and I hate that she is getting tortured. And the main antagonist is a b*tch. Like, how on earth does she not feel bad about doing any of this! Where is her humanity?!
If you guys are still around or are interested in writing more, I promise I will read it. I really love this story so far and would like to see what happens to everyone.
P.S. I love how you guys kept updating your story, even though no one had commented on it so far. Always write for you!
Thank you for your comment, I am glad you are enjoying it, and i write for Scarlett and it slowly kills me inside to write like that, especially to Marie because her mom doesn't care about her, and neither does Scarlett. We have writen more on our forum called "Do You Think I Deserve This?" if you want to check out more that we have written, we decided to wait to write more on the book until we completely finished our forum post.
Thank you again for the comment :)