'Cause You Stop The Noise. - Comments

  • TheBall00ns

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    Bam bitches.
    August 13th, 2011 at 09:42pm
  • TheBall00ns

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    HEY! I GOT MY OWN PAGE!!!!!! YEEEEES! PAGE 6 VIRGINTY = MINE!!! MAUAHAHAH!
    August 13th, 2011 at 09:42pm
  • TheBall00ns

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    Lalalaa, hello! I like this. I wanna know what he wants to show him x3
    August 13th, 2011 at 09:41pm
  • SingingSinner

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    *Gasp!* they're gonna run away together I hope they don't run into trouble
    August 13th, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • SingingSinner

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    This is sooooo sweeeet and I'm having a hard time guessing what'll happen in the end I'm thinkin it either has sumthin to do w/ his dad or gee's addiction? But who knows...
    August 13th, 2011 at 02:27am
  • DaniellaAutumn

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    I know. I thought the same thing xD
    I tried, I'm honestly a terrible writer. I think that after this I'm done with writing.
    I do know how it's going to end, though.
    Thanks :)
    There is a good ending. In my opinion, at least. It has something to do with Frank's dad. My first ending was just fluff and that was stupid.
    August 12th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • TheBall00ns

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    I don't mean to be mean... But consider constructive criticism! I don't exactly see the plot...? Like I just don't know how your ending it.. To me it feels like it should be going for a while yet.. Cause I don't exactly see the plot, like I get it, but normally there is something bigger y'know? Probably not.. Anyways.. Good job! :)
    August 12th, 2011 at 10:22pm
  • Killjoy4life

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    I love it!! :)
    August 12th, 2011 at 09:33am
  • TheBall00ns

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    Awwwh, yay for Ramsay! I really love how you managed to somehow sqeeze Ramsay into this! And you used alibis! My favorite MT song! Well my favorite song!!! AWWWWWWWH, I just wanna make that clear! So are bringing Ramsay into the story now or what...? That would be weird o_0 i mean to very sassy men in one story!? Wooza's! Fouhrneifnouifno, I love alibis! I really loved this! Your doing good! Keep er coming! :)
    August 12th, 2011 at 06:46am
  • totallymcraddicted

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    :D MORE!
    love yaaaaa
    August 12th, 2011 at 01:39am
  • TheBall00ns

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    Hlvjoyyvutv, I love this story. And I wanna know what happens next!!!
    August 12th, 2011 at 12:36am
  • DaniellaAutumn

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    Well I don't think I could kill Frank or Gerard.
    I think some people are going to be mad, though.
    Idk. I might change my mind. I think my original ending for the story was just going to be cute and shit but that's boring.
    His last meeting with Dr Tak, everyone is going to be like omg wtf. It's awesome.
    August 12th, 2011 at 12:31am
  • totallymcraddicted

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    yay a song soon ^^
    yay you updated ^^
    love ya

    PS: don't make them die. O.O I'm serious. the mindfuck better not be one of them dying. cause I'm gonna be pissed
    August 11th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • Jepharee Howard

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    This is so cute.
    August 8th, 2011 at 03:26pm
  • I.Scream

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    I think its a great work in progress, and every time a chapter ends, i am pushed to read the next! Dont beat yourself up about something that people like to read, trust me, its a really good fanfiction, but i think that, when possible, you should make the chapters as long as possible, but otherwise, i love it!
    August 8th, 2011 at 01:11am
  • TheBall00ns

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    Hah... Gerd. Gets to me every time.
    August 7th, 2011 at 02:35pm
  • NeonAngel

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    Wait... WHAT?! H-Hate Gerard!?
    NOOO, I CAN'T!!!!!!!
    WHY?! :'(
    August 6th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • totallymcraddicted

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    But... I dont wanna hate Gee-gee!!!!!
    UPDATE!
    and I hope they end up happy together, or you'll hear from me!!!!
    grr.
    love ya <3
    August 6th, 2011 at 08:39pm
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    I already hate Gerard for not accepting that HE is the sassy one.
    August 6th, 2011 at 08:17pm
  • hangsang.

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    I really like your chapters being short.
    I get rather bored with long chapters, but yours is just the right length for me :)
    I love this!!
    August 6th, 2011 at 07:11am