This is sooooo sweeeet and I'm having a hard time guessing what'll happen in the end I'm thinkin it either has sumthin to do w/ his dad or gee's addiction? But who knows...
I know. I thought the same thing xD I tried, I'm honestly a terrible writer. I think that after this I'm done with writing. I do know how it's going to end, though. Thanks :) There is a good ending. In my opinion, at least. It has something to do with Frank's dad. My first ending was just fluff and that was stupid.
I don't mean to be mean... But consider constructive criticism! I don't exactly see the plot...? Like I just don't know how your ending it.. To me it feels like it should be going for a while yet.. Cause I don't exactly see the plot, like I get it, but normally there is something bigger y'know? Probably not.. Anyways.. Good job! :)
Awwwh, yay for Ramsay! I really love how you managed to somehow sqeeze Ramsay into this! And you used alibis! My favorite MT song! Well my favorite song!!! AWWWWWWWH, I just wanna make that clear! So are bringing Ramsay into the story now or what...? That would be weird o_0 i mean to very sassy men in one story!? Wooza's! Fouhrneifnouifno, I love alibis! I really loved this! Your doing good! Keep er coming! :)
Well I don't think I could kill Frank or Gerard. I think some people are going to be mad, though. Idk. I might change my mind. I think my original ending for the story was just going to be cute and shit but that's boring. His last meeting with Dr Tak, everyone is going to be like omg wtf. It's awesome.
I think its a great work in progress, and every time a chapter ends, i am pushed to read the next! Dont beat yourself up about something that people like to read, trust me, its a really good fanfiction, but i think that, when possible, you should make the chapters as long as possible, but otherwise, i love it!