Cleanliness and Irony. - Comments

I agree with Adam Gontier. :D I definitely loved the conversation and can completely picture those women sitting in the restaurant eating and gossiping about everyone, even each other. It still has me thinking. :) Great job!

At first, I had no idea where you were going with this but I must say I was pleasantly surprised. I was imagining a different era of time with the mentioning of the clothes before later learning that it wasn't. I really liked the way you described the women's conversations & such, it was really believable. The end part, with the salad dressing, was brilliant & a fabulous endnote. Great job!