A Dream Come True- A Jacob Latimore Story - Comments

i like your story, yhu should continue

thanks (: but i kinda already wrote alot of the story and it would be wierd for me to write it in a different way, but thanks for the suggestion, and if you read it, it's really not that confusing to read(:

Hello...(:

I haven't really read your story, but I skimmed through it just to see the layout and the format. I honestly think that it's a bit confusing and distracting for you to put the character's name, and then what they are saying. For example...

Symone: Hey.

Also, you might want to step it up on the grammar, and put a fitting layout to it.

It's a bit hard to read, and not really the type of format Mibba users are used to. Try putting things this way...

"Hey," said Symone.