July 14th, 2011 at 11:52pm
That was so sweet, even if it was only a dream.
I know I'd love to dream about Derek Morgan.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Computer Hearts - Comments
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July 14th, 2011 at 09:58am
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AHHH! my two favourite's of Criminal Minds! Their so cute together in the show; glad someone made a story after them. Nicely done.
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Okay so yes the chapter is titled Dream but I didn't expect for the entire chapter to be a dream; however, it was a pleasant surprise.July 14th, 2011 at 08:26am
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YAYAYAYAY! I LOVE YOU <3
MORGAN AND GARCIA FOREVER!
awesome first chapter though :) definitely a great introduction to the rest of the story !!
aww thanks so much for the little dedication >___< so sweet :3
oh my god and that picture !! *dies* SO PERFECT!July 12th, 2011 at 05:50pm -
>.< LOVE IT! It was great, short and sweet. It left me wanting more. The loyout was so pretty as well :) I wish I could find something to help you on, but its one of those stories that I can't find anythings. Its prefect. Keep on writing.July 12th, 2011 at 06:10am
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Looking forward to see where this goes. I'm pretty excited.
I found this very well written and aside from a couple of errors, I loved it.
Watching Garcia watch away with the other tech, a slightly bemused smile dancing across those bright lips, all he could think was that should have been her he was smiling at.July 12th, 2011 at 06:05am -
Very simple & straight to the point; I like it.
I've subscribed:)July 12th, 2011 at 05:39am -
I love this. Its very simple and clean cut, I'm subscribing!July 12th, 2011 at 05:27am
First of all, I absolutely freaking love your short chapter lengths.My memory span of .098098243 sec does that to me.
The pink heart layout is cute, superbly so in fact and I find the banner oh so wonderfully gushy-like. Kudos for working the right combo, yo! :D
I'd have to admit though, I found the first chapter slightly confusing but then I read it over again and got it. I don't know why I'm so slow this morning, but whatevs. Your second chapter, with it's killer ending? Dear lord almighty, seriously?! Dang it, I'm subscribing. This is just pure awesome.