Ok, I'll have to admit - I'm a huge fan of Criminal Minds, but not so much their fan fictions. I don't know why, but somehow, they're just a turn off. This, however, is awesome.
First of all, I absolutely freaking love your short chapter lengths.My memory span of .098098243 sec does that to me.
The pink heart layout is cute, superbly so in fact and I find the banner oh so wonderfully gushy-like. Kudos for working the right combo, yo! :D
I'd have to admit though, I found the first chapter slightly confusing but then I read it over again and got it. I don't know why I'm so slow this morning, but whatevs. Your second chapter, with it's killer ending? Dear lord almighty, seriously?! Dang it, I'm subscribing. This is just pure awesome.
YAYAYAYAY! I LOVE YOU <3 MORGAN AND GARCIA FOREVER! awesome first chapter though :) definitely a great introduction to the rest of the story !! aww thanks so much for the little dedication >___< so sweet :3 oh my god and that picture !! *dies* SO PERFECT!
>.< LOVE IT! It was great, short and sweet. It left me wanting more. The loyout was so pretty as well :) I wish I could find something to help you on, but its one of those stories that I can't find anythings. Its prefect. Keep on writing.
Looking forward to see where this goes. I'm pretty excited. I found this very well written and aside from a couple of errors, I loved it.
Watching Garcia watch away with the other tech, a slightly bemused smile dancing across those bright lips, all he could think was that should have been her he was smiling at.
First of all, I absolutely freaking love your short chapter lengths.My memory span of .098098243 sec does that to me.
The pink heart layout is cute, superbly so in fact and I find the banner oh so wonderfully gushy-like. Kudos for working the right combo, yo! :D
I'd have to admit though, I found the first chapter slightly confusing but then I read it over again and got it. I don't know why I'm so slow this morning, but whatevs. Your second chapter, with it's killer ending? Dear lord almighty, seriously?! Dang it, I'm subscribing. This is just pure awesome.