I really enjoyed the story and I could feel the pain Isabelle was feeling. The story reminded me of the beginning of stranger then fiction if you have seen it.. Not to be a buzz kill but I found a error if you wanted to fix it for the contest. “I can it just I always get to caught up counting the number of words or paragraphs.” If you didn't catch it its suppose to be " I can its just" not " I can it just" The writing was mature and easy to follow and read. keep writing !(: