Rookie - Comments

Awe... no one commented :( Haha no worries I felt that way too sometimes... anyways i saw ur story on hockeyfancfiction... but it never got finished so i searched for it on here :) So happy to read more about what happened after the first story! You did a great job and dont ever doubt that :)

For the comment swap thing I read from chapter 1-5.
I'm not really into hockey, so I don't know the teams, or the players... :/ But the chapters I read were quite interesting. I like Sophie's personality and I found her past somewhat interesting. It's good to know that Sidney accepted her having been raped and having a daughter, but I feel like her roommate likes her as well.
I also like your writing style. It's not confusing, and it kept me interested in knowing what would be happening next. There were no big mistakes and I think the only thing that you got that's not according to mibba rules are the paragraphs, but it's not a big problem, in my opinion.
Good job :D

Love this story so much. Please keep updating