Shimmer. - Comments

It took me a whole day, but I read everything. I don't like Warner, I think John is too possessive and Rosie cries a lot, yet, it was a good story.

PS: Past Rosie reminds me of Sookie Stackhouse.

It took me a whole day, but I read everything. I don't like Warner, I think John is too possessive and Rosie cries a lot, yet, it was a good story.

PS: Past Rosie reminds me of Sookie Stackhouse.

This is a sweeeeeet story. I can imagine an independent film based on it (One Day vibes). I'm gonna stop myself and be a slow reader so I can appreciate it rightly. Congrats on your writer skills.

Plus, I loved White Winter Hymnal. I'm listening to Fleet Foxes, they're cool.

god this story is still good

THIS STORY HAD ME ON EDGE THE ENTIRE TIME. God, it was perfect. Great transitions from present to past. You're such an amazing writer. This was really really well written, I have to tell you I read it all in a matter of two hours and now it's 4am. I couldn't go to bed without finishing it. I love love love loved it.

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that was indeed the end :)

wait was that the end or not i'm so confused either way really good though

this is great. kinda reminds me of the movie "Blue Valentine"

I DIED with this story!!! So beautiful!!! The way it was written was amazing! I loved how it transitioned from the present to the past! It was great! You are truly one of the best writers I've stumbled upon in this place. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

I HATE ROSE. I DON'T KNOW. HE KEEPS ON HURTING MY BABY JOHN AND IT PAINS ME TO SEE HIM LIKE THAT. I'M JUST CRYING SO HARD AND IT'S NOT EVEN UNHEALTHY ANYMORE OKAY. SUCH A WHORE. PWEH

I HATE ROSE. I DON'T KNOW. HE KEEPS ON HURTING MY BABY JOHN AND IT PAINS ME TO SEE HIM LIKE THAT. I'M JUST CRYING SO HARD AND IT'S NOT EVEN UNHEALTHY ANYMORE OKAY. :(((((((((((

okay, this is how i was so attached with your fic. Great job. But damn rose, i hate her. lol

I HATE ROSE. I DON'T KNOW. HE KEEPS ON HURTING MY BABY JOHN AND IT PAINS ME TO SEE HIM LIKE THAT. I'M JUST CRYING SO HARD AND IT'S NOT EVEN UNHEALTHY ANYMORE OKAY. :(((((((((((

okay, this is how i was so attached with your fic. Great job. But damn rose, i hate her. lol

is this finished already? o.O

I just finished reading this and I must say, it's such an AMAZING story! I also liked how every chapter's been altering between the past and the present. I'm so happy I got to read this! <3

Really great story! -applause-

WTF MIBBA DIDN'T EVEN TELL ME THIS WAS UPDATED LIKE 5 TIMES. THANK GOD I JUST CHECKED FOR KICKS!

I don't like Warner at all, and I hate when the girls are so confuse on the stories, i don't know why but I hate it haha
Update soon please :D

Well now I feel bad for John and now I dislike Rose. It feels like John's always going to be the second choice... She doesn't deserve him.

Omg new reader. This story is just perfect. I love it so much. You guys write so beautifully. Update soon, please!

Omg new reader. This story is just perfect. I love it so much. You guys write so beautifully. Update soon, please!