Shadowed Illusions - Comments

@ JustThinking
Lol, thanks and it was an eye opener when I started writing, you have all these plans to not fall behind and you do anyways.

Why do you think I'm mostly a patient person about updating? xD good chapter! :D

So they kind of sort of have a lunch date? Cute. Wondering how things will progress and Charles does need to strengthen his morals about reding others minds.. Or maybe just lower the control thing. Good chapter.

I hope it comes easier to u to put those ideas together because the story is awesome so far and I know not only me but others are desperately waiting for u to put out the next chapter!!! Anyways I want this next chapter so bad, just the idea of it sounds great so let's make it happen:)

So far you're doing a good job with putting your ideas together. I like how her and Eric's relationship is building up. It's interesting and I'm looking forward to swing what happens next with them. I also wonder how Charles feels about Eric's thoughts and if he simply pushes them out or ignores them now? Maybe he'll see they like each other and do something about it or try and keep them apart or maybe just stay indifferent to it. Idk, too many thoughts at once. Good chapter.

I loved the chapter and the different POV are effective!!! They are so cute together!!! Please update soon!!!<3

Looks like Eric prayed for nothing then xD Charles should know better and hasn't be already seen worse? I mean I don't think Eric is the only one getting that graphic in his mind about her xD I wonder what will happen next and if Eric's thoughts will stay as innocent as before this. Charles may be in for it. Good chapter and I'm looking forward to even more.

Great story so far can't wait to hear more from this group in ur mind
Lol also I would love to know the thoughts of Eric that Charles saw ^//////^

I loveeee youuuu soooooo much!!! Thankyouuuuu!!!! Kinky fight...the body contact;) Charles must be protective over Evelyn<3 Pleaasssee update soon!!!<3 x

Thank you soooooooooooooooo much for the update! I have been waiting for a long time, and the update was well worth the wait! Please please update soon!!!!

I've just found this story and at first I wasn't interested, but I thought I should give it a try...and I am now addicted It is amazing I love how Evelyn speaks her mind and isn't afraid to stand up for herself Please update soon<3 x

This is really good! PLease update soon! I love the chemistry that the sister and erik have! it seems like she is the perfect competion for Erik and the perfect person for him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And the rat of us? Might want to change that one xD

Uh a fight! Well play fight.. Either way, go eve! I think Eric and possibly Charles are in for a surprise. Oh especially Charles if Eric can't keep his thoughts clean xD good chapter and I'm looking forward to even more

Haha, go eve I can't wait to see what she can do, what will go down with her and eric and if charles' jaw will drop because of her powers... That could be fun! More soon please

Hehe, throwing Charles into the mix is fun. Especially now that she can shield her thoughts. I can't say I saw that one coming, but I'm also not totally surprised because of her abilities so far ^.^ Good chapter

So they are both on each others minds? This is going to be fun if you throw Charles and his mind reading skills into the mix. Well maybe xD gone again? Oh well. Have fun and hopefully your absence will give even more creativity for this anyways.. IDK, my thoughts are weird right about now ^.^

I hope for Erik that Charles doesn't hear his thoughts about his baby sister. Because I'm not too sure about how that will turn out ^^ good chapters and I'm looking forward to more of this.

hmm... this could turn out interesting, it's difinetly good so far and I can see my self getting hooked on this.. so I'm also difinetly subscribing.. erhmm.. can't think of anyhthing else to say at this point, since the story hasn't really taken off yet..

More soon please ^.^

Love it!!

I love this story!! Update soon =)