Pretty Please - Comments

I AM SO IN LOVE WITH YOU and this story and the repetition and all the characters and their relationships and all of their nicknames and shit and how fucked up they are i wanna marry you and this story and omg i don't even know what to say this is perf

Um, can there be more of this...? Because this is fucking fantastic and honestly, I don't feel the need to read anything else.

Have you read Imperial Bedrooms by Bret Easton Ellis? I feel as though you should read it.

Oh retract the comment I just left on Mermaid in a Manhole... You do know what you're doing. You are literally the best writer I have read on this site... In fact, you are probably the best writer I have read in a very long time, anywhere. I cannot even deal with this shit. Goddamn.

yayyyy when you write it's like sunshiiiine, on a cloudy daaaaaay. eue

i dont even know what to say bc im sooo confused
but its a good kind of confused yeah
but i love it

I haven't had a proper chance to read this and aahhhhhhhhhhhh
boy sluts and girl sluts wonderful wonderful wonderful its awesome, i don't know. i like cole

i dont even know what to say because i dont think any of it will be able
to full describe how much i love this

You have really great taste in music. And this story is just amazing.

Oooh yay. I love the nicknames.

Immi as a guy that's realllly cool, like I never thought of it cool. Like reincarnation freaky cool. Impie is a cute name, wow. Interesting. I like this.

Oh god oh god oh god. This is extraordinary. It flows so poetically and it's just incredible. Simple as.

aw this is so perfect and amazing
i love it

what a pleasant surprise! i was just about to go to sleep and i saw this was updated!
well, love it. i'm excited to see what happened to imogen and i like all the charater bio things, handsome people.

hahahaha oh cole mohr

such a dreamboat

love you lula, blondie, lindy

hoo hoo!