Fluorescent Adolescent. - Comments

your story is now the air i breath!! it's amazing!

This chapter really broke my heart!
Her father being so completely happy that he doesn't see how miserable his biological daughter.
I believe he is asking for too much from Camille, he destroyed his own family to be happy with a younger woman.
I believe once a man breaks his vows he'll did it again because those vows he made at his first wedding was suppose to be until death do they part.
And now he is all being a family man with his new daughter when he was hardly there for Camille because he either away due to work or meeting up with his mistress.
So he is marrying the woman that he cheated with on Camille's mother?????
And she already had a daughter too????
Man that is a low blow, I feel really bad for Camille because now she doesn't want to believe in love since she believes she will get hurt if she puts herself out there.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Once again, you've made me tear up :'( I hope Josh breaks up with Hanna and gets with Camille.

the rehearsal dinner made me cry. and the moment with josh made me so happy, but i totally get what camille is going through. he needs to be single before he can be with her....

christ omg i felt really horrible when that girl called camille's father "dad". what a cunt. and make josh break up with hanna so they can be together!! i know camille doesn't wanna be "that girl" but COME ON NOW they're in love D:

by far my favourite story

Omg nooo!! You're making me cry! lol

The hole time through Camille's struggle with her dad and then that stupid woman's daughter's speech :( it made me sad, it made me feel so sorry and sad for her I wish I could of just hugged her through the hole thing. And then how strong she was with Josh when he kissed her. Awh girly i'm just gonna cry right now. This story was literally a beautiful disaster :') look tearies!

Utterly brilliant.
I love her mother's strength through all of this, and it really proves the phrase "like mother, like daughter". Whereas Camille's mother is being strong for her daughter, Camille is being strong by proving to her father that he did not break her. At least until his new fiancee's daughter calls him dad. That was so wrong man, but no matter how heartbreaking it was (and believe me you were not the only one to feel it) it was the perfect touch to this chapter, and the perfect way to close the door on their relationship. She realized that she was replaced and that she couldn't get him back, especially after she ran out and he didn't go after her. It gives the story a strong sense of realism; not everyone will put themselves out there for others, you know?

Josh, however, did exactly that.
He has proven how much he truly loves Camille because he has placed his dignity on the line just to admit his feelings. It takes balls, and even though he has given her his heart, she's been so fucked up by her father's affair and Doug's cheating that she is overly paranoid. It's sad, really, and I hope to see this story take a turn for the better, but don't worry, I am still very much emotionally invested and excited. Now I'm onto Uneasy Hearts and I'm positive that it will be just as great as this update.

Great job!

OMFG. I am like crying. That was perfect. I could like feel the pain she was in. I was so happy that Josh told her he loved her. Updated again soon :)

when they get back together,ima be so happy.
josh is just so whhdkwkdhuwmdobducntk.

I really like your Josh stories. And I like the back and forth.

Only three more chapter?!?! OH MY GOD! I freaking love this story man, what am I going to do when it ends haha. Loved this chapter though! Showing what happened between them. It's so sad! But I cannot wait for more! I freaking love Josh and Camille! Ugh, this story is definitely one of my favourites. Can't wait for more!
Update again soon please!!
ALSO, in exactly a WEEK we are going to be seeing these lovely boys in person! WHO'S EXCITED?!?! I AM!!!! Hahahaha.

So I finally came and read this story of yours and I must say I love it. :) I love YM@S
Also I saw 'an ode to maybe's' comment and I got to meet all of the guys back when they were on warped. Nicest guys ever. So if you have the chance GO MEET THEM! Because they are super nice :)
I'm so jealous you get to go see them on the noise tour. They are coming NO where close to were I live. The closest is like 7 hours away on a day that I have school. Blahhh!

But anywhoo I look forward to reading the rest of this story :)

Drifting apart sucks but, sadly happens. I can see why though.
I hope Josh comes to his senses in the present and gets rid of Hanna.

:o oh joshy woshy :( at least you have another joshua fransexy story after this one.

omg nooooo *cries* whyyyy?

Aw I just started reading this story, I'm sad it's already almost over. :( You have no idea how much I love it! And it was so sweet when Josh told Camille he loves her! I wonder what will happen next. :)

Oh my god I hate you and I love you at the same time.
This entire chapter had me gasping and whining, and when I got towards the end I became so mad that I hit my thighs with my fists. A story hasn't made me want to do that in a loooooong time, so I give you props for having that effect on me. I love the little bit of foreshadowing you put in this chapter as far as Doug and Silver are concerned.

"Silver just gave her a wide grin before standing up and sitting directly next to Doug with a grin. Camille watched as the two shared a smile but she didn’t think much of it as she walked out the door."

I thought that was clever! Very good for keeping the plot in line and reminding people that Camille had no idea that Doug was cheating on her with Silver. It keeps the reader Camille's mindset. Also, I feel so bad for Josh, but at the same time, Camille was right. They weren't really talking and he can't just expect her to wait around for him to visit her once every year or so and have everything they shared go back to normal. It just doesn't work like that. Sad situation indeed.

I cannot wait for the next chapter and I'm bummed that this only has three more to go, but I'm excited because I saw the new Josh story you're creating and I still need to comment on it. I will be doing that right now.

Also, thank you so much for whoring out my story just like you said you would. I was so close to giving up on it but now I've been writing for a new chapter and I just feel so motivated! I can't stop and I keep going page after page. I definitely have you to thank for that :)

I don't want this story to end. It's so perfect.