Poet - Comments

There was a lot of dialogue, but it seems as though you intended it to be that way. I like all the wittiness in what they say and the play on words. I like the way there are always toying with each other and being sarcastic. I think this is a very well written piece!

I really like this, it's so sweet and whimsical, I like how you employ the idea of fate and coincidence but keep it very simple and charming :). I adore the girl as well, she seems so out of this world.

This is very intriguing, as I agree. This was a wonderful story entry and a true masterpiece! You're entry is looking good in this contest!

The picture is adorable. That was a strange but very intriguing excerpt for a summary. Good choice!

I I like the chapter title, and also the sub-chapter titles, especially the first two. Actually, no, I like them all.

The girl is so strange, and the boy is so, I don't know how to describe him. But by the third sub-chapter, I really like both of them already.

“Handwriting and drawings…ink and pencil.” The way she pronounced the words carefully made them come to life. - I like this line somehow. Hm, I guess it's because it's so strange. Or because it shows so much of what the guy thinks of her, that she brings things to life.

A thrill shot through him as he took a sip. Her lips had touched where his lips were now touching. - this kind of made me laugh. He likes her! :D

I’m being happy for all the unhappy people out there. They need cheering up. and It’s beautiful. Not many things are beautiful anymore. - she has such beautiful lines.

Hm, wow. I thought this was pretty amazing. It forces me to think and really digest what's happening. Everything about this story is strange and intriguing. It's very... poetic. :)