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  • crescendo.

    crescendo. (100)

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    I quite enjoy this, also. I'm excited for when you continue it, slow or as fast as you may.
    I'll be waiting for a email in my inbox.
    September 18th, 2011 at 07:39pm
  • that's just lilly.

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    It's very good! I like how you wrote it. It got me laughing.(:
    August 17th, 2011 at 02:29am
  • mjamodeo

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    What you have so far has definitely reeled me in and making me want to read more; I almost died laughing when Kenneth made the bitch comment to Kiara. Anyway, well done.
    August 7th, 2011 at 04:37am
  • Lovey love's blossom

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    Hello! So far I really like what you've got! I like the repetition of it and how just the little things you've added tell a lot about his parents and family. (Not sure if you did it on purpose but it really came across nicely!) I also listened to the song Bang Bang, nice suggestion! Oh and it didn't feel like the ending was given away at all, if anything it make me wonder what exactly happened, which made me want to read more. (Which I personally think is always a good thing! haha) Anyways so far so good! I hope to read more soon.
    July 9th, 2011 at 12:19am
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