Can you believe it? - Comments

i like it! please keep it going.. I wish I had more to read!

please write more. i have a feeling this story is gonna be good

This was so good! I really like the plot, keep up the good work :D it was really good <3
if you like nick jonas I have a storie I think you would like. Read once in a lifetime and tell me what you think! :D / love kahlan

It's very short, but -very- attention catching.

Usually I'm one to give someone like a five page report of constructive critic, but, in this case I honestly have nothing to say! You have it totally figured out!

I look forward to more from this. <3

If I didn't know any better I'd think she didn't know who he was. ;)

Cute

i loved this the second i saw the summary!! i think it's genius!!!
it sounds amazing already so please update ASAP!!!