An Eye for an Eye and a Lie for a Lie - Comments

It's always good to rewrite stuff, try adding in a bit more detail even if it's only a little bit because it draws people in it's a really good story as a whole but a little more detail will give it that bit extra I think

@ missinvisible2013
Thanks. I had given up on this story and was thinking about rewriting it, because I think it was a little rushed, and sketchy in parts.

I don't normally like comic book based stories but this is actually good, it's something I would read as well which has surprised me keep it up!