I rather enjoyed the way that you had done the whole master and slave role play. It was done very well and sometimes people tend to take the whole idea of the master and slave a little too over board but this was done tastefully and you didn't make me want to cringe away from it like I have done so with other master and slave stories. You did it in a very good and none disturbing way. I also enjoyed that by the end of their act they broke the character and were still close like a couple should be. Well done. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck hun!