well this sounds really good so far, summary teaser everything.. BUT can you pretty please change the layout just a bit?? It's very difficult to read.. I had to highlight the entire text to be able to read it.. pretty please (^-^) * *
This is an interesting idea, one that I must say is the first I've seen. Which is good, giving a fan-fic its own taste of originality.
I'm curious as to where this story will go, and even though it's the first chapter, I'm looking forward to what will happen. It seems like you'll keep the readers entertained throughout. :)