Desperate Desires & Unadmirable Plans. - Comments

  • MYP

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    THEY GOT A HAPPY ENDING AND THERE ARE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE HOW HAPPY I AM! I don't know why capital letters felt necessary to say that. Probably because I loved this story too much! It's definitely one of my favourites, just because their whole relationship was so fucked up. I love Austin and Layla. They are definitely perfect for each other and I am damn glad that they realized it! I'm going to miss this story!!!
    Also, “Say it again and then I’ll think about having sex with you." “I LOVE YOU!”
    Oh my god, they will always be one of my favourite couples! Hahahaha.
    October 5th, 2011 at 07:14am
  • beccuh

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    i loved this story.
    great job, the ending was cute.
    October 4th, 2011 at 06:06am
  • Noxious

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    Pshhh idk what you're talking about this story not being very good in your authors note. I freaking love this story and I am so sad to see it come to an end. so don't think for a second that it wasn't good because it was amazing.
    I am so happy that they are together!! I was scared that they wouldn't end up together!! But they did. Great story. :)
    October 4th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • arduous

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    I'm so bummed to see this end, but I really enjoyed reading each chapter. I just loved this story in general. (:
    October 4th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • lovelyhope

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    I loved this ending!! I was so worried that it'd be sad but I'm glad you made it a happy one.
    October 4th, 2011 at 01:04am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH THIS IS SO CUTE THE WHOLE HAPPY ENDING WITH AUSTIN ADMITTING THAT HE LOVES HER AND HER MAKING HIM SAY IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN GVDBIAIOJGKLNBSGVUOIKAW
    October 3rd, 2011 at 11:58pm
  • tmdaisy22

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    That ending had me smiling the entire time! Loved it! Great story, sad to see it end.
    October 3rd, 2011 at 11:29pm
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    WHYYYY DOES THIS HAVE TO FINISHHHHHHH
    This was SO good my girl. I loved every single word of it.
    Austin finally changed and Im very happy for Layla. Too bad this had to end tho :(
    I really liked it, believe me.

    Just a question: Why do you delete the Microsoft document after you finish posting the story??? I keep them all!!!:)
    October 3rd, 2011 at 10:37pm
  • hachie

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    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    This time Layla went after Austin after he left!
    They do belong with each other because Austin and Layla have a relationship like no other.
    And I believe that Layla may be wearing the pants because Austin doesn't know much about being in a relationship.
    He finally said outloud that he loves Lalya and he made promises that she will only be the only girl he ever touches, thinks about and love!
    I am so happy that Layla followed Austin back to that bar.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 3rd, 2011 at 03:36pm
  • SweetPea

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    One of my favorite stories of yours!
    Sad to see it end, but I loved it!:)
    October 3rd, 2011 at 09:18am
  • raja sahara

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    WOW. I was expecting a sad ending there, but I loved this.
    I loved Austin's part especially because I feel like he was the one who grew the most in this entire story.
    I wanted this to have a sequel, but then, the more I think about it, I don't because the ending you wrote was perfect enough and I think this is one of those stories left to our imaginations.
    I'm going to miss this story so much, but you are awesome for writing it. So, I'm glad that if I ever start an Austin Gibbs story, I'm going to have this sitting in my subscriptions box to go back to :)
    October 3rd, 2011 at 09:02am
  • ignorance.always

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    :D Finally.
    October 3rd, 2011 at 09:02am
  • MYP

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    OH MY GOD. SERIOUSLY GIRL. THIS STORY JUST KILLS ME. I love it!!!!! It's so good I don't even know what to do with myself! And this chapter, oh my god, how depressing. But it made me love Austin more for realizing this. But ugh! Damn it! Why can't there just always be a happy ending? Fuck life and it's non-happy endings. Hahaha. I cannot wait for the last chapter!
    Update again soon please!!!
    October 2nd, 2011 at 07:10am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I am genuinely speechless. I really do like where this story went. Austin finally admitted it. Right now, I think I might actually want a happy ending. Maybe. I'm not sure, but I sure do love this.
    October 1st, 2011 at 11:13pm
  • erika_xtc

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    I'm almost tearing up. I feel SOOO bad for Austin *nods* :'(
    October 1st, 2011 at 08:02pm
  • SweetPea

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    That made my heart hurt....
    October 1st, 2011 at 04:07pm
  • lovelyhope

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    At least Austin finally admitted it but I feel as if it's too late :(
    October 1st, 2011 at 03:53am
  • raja sahara

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    he loves her! d'awwww. :)
    September 30th, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • hachie

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    Wow so he was too late???? 0.0
    Well he finally admit that he loves her though nobody heard him say it!
    Was saying something like this; "If you love someone, you let them and if they come back, you are met to be?"
    Well maybe over time Layla and Austin will into each other and FINALLY get together like a real couple!
    I mean they are truly met to be together but they are too prideful to admit that they actually love each other, especially Austin!
    So one chapter before this story comes to an end, I really do hope that they end up with each other because they really belong with each other!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 30th, 2011 at 04:38pm
  • sukisumi4ever

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    Thats soooooo sad! omg! im gonan cry...I'm also completely avoiding doing my business communications homework.... damn... i loved this....
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:40pm