I just joined the comment swap on Mibba and I wanted to start off by saying I was really interested in the relationship drama. I feel like sticking to usual spelling and words would work best because for me. Reading the words that were spelled weird made me focus too much on the specifics of the word instead of the overall context of what was going on. To be honest with you I’m not sure of who this story is about but the way this started off, I would defiantly keep reading because the whole concept of this has caught my attention. I feel like the layout of the story is kind of distracting too... but this is my personal opinion. I think that adding some spaces between the paragraphs would help but this is just an opinion. Overall I enjoyed the first chapter to this story and will continue to read. I have been gone from Mibba for awhile and I’m excited I get to find new and interesting stories. I don’t want to spoil it for the people reading comments before reading the chapter, but part of me was kind of mad at the demeanor she took. LOL. I feel like as someone dealing with a cheater, I would be pissed and it would defiantly show in my writing. HAHAHA.
October 26th, 2018 at 09:43pm