Breaking the Rules of Bat Country - Comments

Okay, so I've spent the last three days reading this story, and I fucking love it! I have never read anything that's gotten my stomach all knotted up the way this story has. The emotions in this are insane! And pretty much every main character has pissed me off in some way. >< I love the plot, and I'm beyond excited to read the last chapters of this and then the sequel. New favorite story, by the way. :D

NO.
NO.
NO.

Johnny needs to sit down. If he actually gets in the way of Brian and Bailey being together, I will lose my shit. His time is up. He blew it and quite frankly, he needs to get over it and stop being selfish about letting Brian "have" her. But speaking of losing their shit, Matt is a psycho. I'm legitimately scared for every single one of them. I used to feel sorry for Matt and I was kind of rooting for him as the underdog to be with Shari but now? omfg. Just... no. I don't even know what to think right now. So much drama. But I love it. I'll be over in the corner dying until the next update, don't mind me.

Omg why cliff hanger ): I was waiting for the fight and what Matt would say! I think Matt only wants a place to out his dick in -.- Maybe he cares for Shari but he just wants a fuck ): that's why he invented the pact but please update ASAP love d it. Also Brian and bails need to admit their love for each other >.<

OH MY GOD!!!! Are you kidding me?!?!? Seriously... all the action in one chapter_?!?!? I LOVE IT!!!! It was great!!! I really was waiting for this to happen!!!! It was great!!!! I can't wait for your next update! I'm sure it's gonna be great!!!

oh holy shit that was a hole lot of drama..!! matt talking about shari and bailey like they're puppets?? damn, that ain't so smart of him!! johnny.. i dunno what i think about his confessions.. maybe he just wanna be with her so she wont be with brian.. not sure.. hahah.. guh! b&b really should just man up and tell each other already shari, zacky & matt.. now that's harder.. considering how matt talks, i like zacky better BUT he and shari still fight a lot and.. aah i don't know.. in a way i feel a bit sorry for matt.. think that he ain't so good with feelings and stuff like that.. can't wait to see what happens next, now that shads' in the apartment with everyone except for johnny.. <3 this <3

Come on Brian - ask her!!!!!!

*S I G H* if last chapter was a simple "♥" chapter, then this chapter is like the "HOLY SHIT!" chapter, but i feel like those are usually the first two words to come out of my mouth after reading anything you write anyway, so sorry for potentially being a predictable fan girl. let's start with matty boy, shall we? HOLY FUCKING COW, MATTHEW! that is all. but oh, johnny boy... i love that he loves bailey, but i can't help but admit that went about it allllll kinds of wrong. i mean bailey obviously cares about him and loved him for a long time, but i feel like she's brian's now. and not in the way that it's like "well the one i wanted didn't love me so here's the next best thing." no way. i feel like bailey and johnny had their time, but now it's time for brian and bailey. but who fucking knows what kind of crazy shit is going to be in BTP so maaaaybe i shouldn't speak too soon! XD now i feel like i'm rambling because i really don't know how to comment on stories... and zacky and shari just need to GET TOGETHER. oh MY GOD.

OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...ITS GONNA BE CRAZY,MAN!I HOPE BAILEY WILL CHOOSE BRIAN AND SHARI WILL CHOOSE ZACK...MATT AND SHORT SHIT CAN GO FUCK THEMSELVES :DD

Omgomgomg i cannot wait to see the fight with matt, this is gonna be suuuuper interesting! I really liked this chapter i hope.brian steps up

Nice chapter, love the heat up scene :D ... Please update soon :D

Holy. Fuck. 
Holy fucking fuck. 
HOLY SHIT FUCKING FUCK. 
Why did you leave me hanging like that? WHY? WHY? WHY? Oh my god. What am I going to do now? How long must I wait until the next update? Oh, my, Breanne! Haha. 

Oh My GOD! I wish Brian would just tell her already! I wonder whats gonna happen with Matt?

Yelled like a maniac at seeing this updated! For the love of all that is good woman, never stop writing! And please update soon, this wait will be killing me!

Update woman waiting is killing me!

I love this story! I really want Bailey and Brian to get together, and Johnny to leave. Seriously, he annoys me in this story, all he does is yell and insult Bailey. Also Shari and Zacky, the signs are soooo obvious that they love each other, i just want to smack them. /: Matt needs to go get someone else, he's just.......there, always making problems between Shari and Zack.. i almost feel bad for him. Anyways keep up the good work, i'm really excited to read the last few chapters. :)

Matt needs to figure out what he wants... Bailey and bri are so cutee Please please update soon!!!

Ugh, Johnny pisses me off. And Bailey, only when she is with Johnny.
When she is with Brian, she is fine.
I just want her and Johnny to be friends, and her to go out with Brian.
And Matt, Matt can leave in general. He doesn't love anyone.
Zack loves Shari, and they need to get together too.

Fucking Bailey..-.- If she really loves Brian why does she talk about Johnny and Matt..:D

Okay, so I haven't commented in awhile which is a bit shit of me [I don't have internet where I'm living at the moment], but I freaking love this story. I seriously can't wait to see what happens, Bailey and Brian should seriously get their act together hahah

Dang. I want to bang their heads together!