The Stars, The Moon - Comments

I feel like I'm reading a historic novel. This is so amazing and I have fallen completely in love!!

your work always keeps me coming back for more. =]

This story is starting off great! I can just see the chaos off in the distance though, I'm just sitting on the edge of my chair waiting to see it play out! Let's go!!!!!

I think I'm going to sob if they don't end up together. GET THE SH*T STARTED, LET IT HIT THE WALL! Whoo, I am ready for this story. SO READY. BORN READY.

I love this chapter, although be careful with their/they're/there and your/you're. You had a couple errors with those. One of them was putting 'your right' instead of 'you're right' and the other that I remember is 'their strange' instead of 'they're strange.

I really like your story and your writing is really, really great. Terrowin kind of reminds me of the book The Wheel Of Time.

Your writing is amazing. Congratulations on being a very talented individual. I just subscribed.

They're so adorably amazing. Awe.

Oh sweet baby Jesus this is so much better than I even remember it to be.

this is amazing!
please update again soon :)

I see you have a lot of people addicted to this story. I am interested to see where you might take this some day as well. Great descriptions and writing techniques I am definitely impressed. Update soon, mibba needs more writers like you.

This story is so well written and the plot is just amazing (even if it is only two chapters in). I'm subscribing and can't wait for you to update.

This is amazing

Oh lord I wish this story was back

WHY HAS THIS TAKEN ME SO LONG?!



That's what I want to do to this story, you beautiful writer, you!

I love historical stories! I'm so glad you decided to write one!
It's beautiful and so well written I can't wait for more=)

I love historical stories! I'm so glad you decided to write one!
Its beautiful and so well writer I can't wait for for=)

Amazing.
I'm a little confused though, if Emeline's mother married another man, wouldn't she take his last name instead of remaining Lady Cromwell?
And I'm more than a little upset that Arthur died, his death seems a little ominous, but I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I've been listening to You're The Voice by John Farnham a lot. It's my ringtone, much to my brother's dismay. ;)

This chapter was interesting. I like Em. And her mother. And aww, Arthur's dead? I liked him hah.

More soon!

I loved the chapter. All those descriptions are so well written it's so easy to picture how it all looks like :)
And for music.. I recommend the band called Heroes Get Remembered. :) They're really awesome. They play rock music. (and the bassist is the dynamite o.o)