I can't believe there are no comments for this story yet! I really like how this has begun, keep going it sounds like it will be really interesting. I loved how descriptive you were, it allows the reader to really be able to picture your characters and settings. =)
I really like how this has begun, keep going it sounds like it will be really interesting.
I loved how descriptive you were, it allows the reader to really be able to picture your characters and settings. =)