I Can Be Your Hero - Comments

I loved how I could tell how the characters were feeling in your story! The use of dialog was great, and so was your writing style in general. I also liked you contribution of lyrics! I don't read het much, but this was pretty interesting. :-)

:( She should have asked.

awww

Loved the update girl!!

(Comment swap!)
First of all, I love Avenged Sevenfold. They are amazing. I love your layout. The description was a little long but whatever. It was helpful. I like how you set up Naomi and Matt's meeting. Very cute. I loved this. Great job!

hey from comment swap. I have to admit that I'm not a huge fan of Avenge Sevenfold stories but this is actually pretty good so far I only read the first chapter at the moment but I'm defiantly going to continue. keep it up. this is great. :)

Comment Swap.
That's too bad because I really am into Avenged Sevenfold fics, but so not the one about straight relationships. I really only read gay fics, like, it is an obsession I can't get myself to control.
I'm sorry I didn't give your story a try, but my comment sure can't put you down because first, I really didn't judge it as bad, and second, I can see a lot of good comments down there and the readers seem to totally love it c:
Good luck for the rest of it :D

I'm from comment swap. This story is cool. I've seen a few like this, but I think you're making it original. So props to you. There are few grammar and spelling errors, which makes the story better to read. I think you have a good story so far. I hope you continue on it. :)

i love it

Haha thats such a high school move
"Hey girl, my friends wants your digits"
Cool story, I hope it progresses into Naomi actually becoming
a singer/frontwomen or whatever...

Update!! please and thank you, very interested in it!

You. Need. To. Update. Missy!! :) <3

uh oh i wonder how she knows them i cant wait for more. update soon.

Ah the wonders of ice cream :)

I really like this can't wait for more :)

oooh, is she gonna approach him?!
*subscribes*

Love it! I hope Matt grows a pair and goes to talk to her! :) Keep updating!

It's awesome! (Note...mibba should have a 'like' button like facebook :P )

Aw i like the idea of Matt not wanting to drink every night :} not often i see anything like that!
I cant wait for more x