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  • Mike Dirnt.

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    I don't even know what that was.
    February 28th, 2007 at 12:17pm
  • K---

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    That was interesting, i'm intrigued, will you be writing any more?
    i was a little confused though, with the switches in POV.
    other than that it was pretty good, i liked the way you did her thoughts inside the room, so muddled, it made it all the more interesting.
    hopefully more soon
    February 28th, 2007 at 11:25am
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