June 9th, 2012 at 04:54pm
You need to change the background of the layout, along with the text. Bright green font just hurts my eyes, maybe mess around with the layout maker until you can get it right? It just bothers me. But whatever floats your boat.
I'm not that huge on Gerard Way stories, never really been into them but this has some potential if you could fix the layout up.
:3
Good going buddy ;)