September 2nd, 2011 at 12:24pm
First let me say that I am really enjoying this story. Your character development is something that makes it stand out from the rest.
I love that Paige and Josh are slowly getting to know one another and I can't wait to see what happens as their relationship deepens. Her boyfriend on the other hand, I want to punch him in the throat. It should be interesting to see if he comes home while Josh is at the apartment.
I also want to say that I like how you are slowly releasing information as we go along. For example, in the most recent chapter how Paige was talking about being crazy. I hope the story continues on in this manner, and you don't shove a ton of information at us at once.
Anyways, I really like the story and I can't wait to see what happens next!
I can't wait to read the next chapter :3 xxxxx