Heart Means Everything - Comments

THIS IS SO FUCKING PERFECT HOLY SHIT
IM IN LOVE WITH TYOU

uodateupdateupdate!!! I really really really love this story okay. please don't give up on it

Loved the update!
They are so cute together! :)

Love it as usual! Short but better than nothing, haha. Jeremy is sweet to Alix. <3

I was smiling the entire time I read these chapters. Alix and Jeremy are so cute together!

So I'm very much in love with this.
You need to update before I explode.
Josh is absolutely perfect in this and Jeremy too. :)

Josh is hilarious and very smart.

She needs to listen to Josh!! haha

Great updates! :)

Listen to Josh. HE IS A SMART MAN. Aw, they had a little date and she has faith in him. <3

I wonder what her dad has to talk to her about? o: and why'd Jeremy get nervous? O_o

I love the update. And three updates today? Good day.
Keep up the good work!

love the story so far! Can't wait for more :)

Yes. You should definitely update again today.

Josh making a move on Alix maybe? o:
Better back off because she's Jeremy's girl.
Awesome update!

They are cute together. It is moving a bit fast but I do that as well sometimes so. Great update!

Oh my god they are so cute.
This story is just perfect. Oh my god I love it.

Hey I don't know if it's my computer but your chapters are cut off. Other then that, your story is fabulous.

Lay Out
I like the lay out but it makes it hard to read the words. Maybe add a solid color in the story content area at least?

Banner
The banner fits well with the story.

Chapter 1
Maybe actually draw out a scene rather than just rushing things all in one go? I'm sorry if this seems a bit rude. It just seems like the plot is being rushed. A little more of a description of Jeremy's thoughts and the world around him would be nice.

Chapter 2
I think this chapter was cut off. :/

Chapter 3
Maybe you could explain the emotions that are going through everyone's head to help with the fighting scene?

Overall
This isn't a bad story because it has potential. You just got to take the time to plot the characters and develop them. Overall, this story seems a bit rushed.

You updating literally made my day.
I got so scared when the fight was mentioned, but Jeremy definitely did kick ass, and I am really happy that nothing bad happened to him. I find it funny that Alex is considered the quiet one, he seems like a pretty outgoing person. :)

Jeremy to the rescue! haha, it was nicely written. I laughed when Jeremy said "Come at me." Great update!