Hey I REALLY like your story. Keep writing I want to know what happens next, I'm eager to find out. This is really a good story line.
Keep up the execllent work...
(i have a story that runs along the assasin lines ad would like it if you checkedit out its called In The Line Of Fire...) I think it needs help and you are the author to do so. Please. And I'm the first to comment yay :)