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tyler farr. (100)

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Jennifer this is ahmazing.
You need to update it right now. : )
More soon?

May 2nd, 2008 at 09:55pm

Extra Ordinary (100)

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Jennifer, please update! I LOVE YOU!!!

March 20th, 2008 at 03:45am

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OH MY GOD!!! I think I just wet myself! XD

February 23rd, 2008 at 07:03am

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Oh, no JOEY!!! awesome chapters Jennifer, update soon

February 22nd, 2008 at 05:17am

The Reverend Twitch. (250)

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Awsome updates dude! A few mistakes here and there, just proof read before you post anything okay?

Otherwisethan that, very dramtic and very good description

February 21st, 2008 at 10:17pm

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Oh, Jen, good show, I'ma subcribe. The only part that confused me a little was the end, how come Billie got mad? Anyway, good job!!! :)))

February 21st, 2008 at 04:54am

The Reverend Twitch. (250)

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I'M LOVING IT!!!!!!!!! i SHALL SUBSCRIBE BECAUSE THIS STORY IS FUCKING AWSOME!

February 20th, 2008 at 08:19pm

emily. (400)

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I'm loving it so far! Please tell me when you update.

And, if you don't already have one, would you like me to be your beta reader?

February 20th, 2008 at 08:18pm