Stomach of the Ventriloquist - Comments

SylvieIsTheScarecrow (100)

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I absolutely love this story - the mixture of the beautiful and grotesque, the macabre circus feel, the intense and vivid narrative. Your writing is simply amazing love, never stop...

November 12th, 2011 at 09:22pm

Balmorhea (100)

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This is really good. :) Subscribed.

October 23rd, 2011 at 06:21pm

MorphineLullaby (100)

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I love this story.

It always keeps me guessing and coming back for more. You somehow manage to make me sympathize with Delilah, even though she's the bitch everyone hates. I mean, I love her and I hate her. You've got me split between not wanting her to find peace and staying Jack's ticket to stardom, and wanting her soul to finally be laid to rest.

I can't wait to read more :)

October 23rd, 2011 at 06:13pm

break.my.bones (100)

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Damn I did not predict Wyatt to be so fucking crazy! I was in shock when he killed her. This is so suspenseful!

July 26th, 2011 at 02:50am

florence (1000)

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This is so weird, but good. Really good. Your writing style is amazing; you really have a way with words. I'll be trying to keep up with this story most likely. (:

July 21st, 2011 at 11:41pm

break.my.bones (100)

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Holy shit, this is brilliant. How does this not have more comments?! Well anyway, I subscribed :)

July 21st, 2011 at 03:09pm

hands (100)

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i've only read the summary so far, but i like where it is going.

July 14th, 2011 at 01:06am