This Love, This Hate - Comments

Damn cock-blocks! I was looking for more smuttiness between Jay and Ashley :(

Whoops - I meant bonding time between Danny & Ashley - sorry for the mix up, lol

Ooohh damn Keslie for cock-blocking. Looks like Ashley and Jorel were about to get it on before that happened. I don't like what Ash's now ex-boyfriend did - that's just f'ed up. I hope to see more of Danny & Ashley scenes, sexual and non-sexual.

Can't wait for the next installlment of this story - it's gonna be gooooood. :-D
^__^

Thanks for the shout out!
Can't wait for more!

Sounds like Danny has a crush on Ashley. Great chapter - can't wait for the next one.

Keep up the great work. ^__^

Cliff-hanger! Why must it end like that?

I love their bonding, I wanna bond with Jorel over a bong!
Love it!

I'd say Danny as well since they seem to get along so well and so fast.
Keep up the great work!

I say Danny 'cause you've written it so it seems like he has a crush on her.

I loved how you made a twist in the plot with the attempted kidnapping, that was unexpected.

Not sure who she should hook up with. I'm thinking Danny, but that's just my opinion.

I love this story already - can't wait for the next chapter. :-)

Keep up the great work. ^__^

Jorel's a dumbfuck... But I bet he'll be the one to save her from the creeper.
Keep up the good work!

Jay's such a fucking dildo, I swear. This is really awesome, keep it up.

Love this story(:

I really like this story and I can't wait for more!
And I love that she punched Sara in the face! :]

Dude, that was fucking awesome! I love it!

J's a dildo, but I still love him. Great update...kinda tempted to punch Zack out :D

This is really awesome. Keep it up, can't wait for the sexiness that is Hollywood Undead!