Right when I saw your layout I was like "Hell Yeah Logan! He's So Cute!" XD This story starts off nice:) I like that your writing is very descriptive, I can just picture everything going on in my head.
June 10th, 2012 at 03:45am
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After just reading the first paragraph I said "whoa" to myself. The use of description is incredible. This story is over all very well written. I like how you put James in there to give advice. It seems very realist. I am just amazed with all the description. Lets leave it at that. Its perfect.June 9th, 2012 at 05:24pm
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I felt this was nicely and appropriately done for a "first time" story. I makes me feel a bit awkward picturing Logan in that position since he's on my wall staring at me right now XD. I like how you put little things from the show in there.Anyway nicely done and amazing job with the word count, my chapters are always so short.February 24th, 2012 at 11:12pm
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I'm also a part of the One Day I Will contest, and I decided to check out the competition;-)... this was AMAZING!!!February 22nd, 2012 at 06:45am
