Too Good To Be True - Comments

*comment swap* Hi there! I liked this story, even though I'm not a Hockey fan. It's not something I would've read had I found in the stories section though. I think your chapters are a little short and there are a few problems with grammar and that stuff in some chapters. Nothing too big, just enough to notice. Overall, I surprisingly enjoyed this (I wanted to be a wedding planner when I was a kid!) and I encourage you to keep writing (: x

Brought here by comment swap. I'm not a sports fan. At all, but I did give a look over your story and from what I saw it looks well written and very good.

I also like the layout, it's not harsh on the eyes and colour coordination actually reminds me of old baseball cards from the 30s-40s, The layout scheme is very fitting.

Some of the chapters where short, but sweet and still conveyed the story scene well. Good job, sure this is a prize read for any that like these type of stories. :}

So far this is a well written story. Usually I don't read hockey stories, but I am a fan of hockey (Chicago fan forever!) I love how you're descriptive with everything, even though some of the chapters run a little short; it's all about quality not quantity!

Like I said, I'm really liking the story line so far and I'm definitely subscribing. Keep up the good work so far and I can't wait for the next update!

Glad the comment swap brought me here! Although I'm not really one to read about hockey players, this story is really good. That comes from your details and non-stereotypical plot line. I absolutely love how your story isn't really cliche. You're a talented writer, so kudos on that. I truly liked this story.

Comment swap brought me here..at first I didn't think I would like this, but once I started reading.. :3 your writing style already made me wanna read more. You write detailed and NOT boring, which is extremely important. I found it really cute how Steven acted with her when they met again, so adorable. :3 It was obvious something would be going wrong with Jon soon...I expect more drama to come there :D

Though I never read Hockey stories, since I know jack about Hockey period and only have a favorite team, because I was invited to go to a game, I really liked this story. The plot is very unique, and the character's intrigue me, though Steven isn't in my attraction area...thing, I still kept an open mind and I ended up liking this story.

Very well written, I'm normally a slash reader and writer, but this is something I might check up on sometime or another. Thank you for making this lovely story. I hope it gets a lot more comments and subscribers because you truly deserve it.

-Greg

I'm glad you're intrigued by the story line!
Hope you continue to enjoy it!

Hmm...I'm curious!
This is different, very different, but I'll subscribe.

Oh thank you! I'm glad you like it. I was a little skeptical when I first thought of everything.

Alright so, I'm not a big Boston fan but I'm loving the plot. Kooooodo's! (: