Moonlight Meetings - Comments

  • silent hearts.

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    This is certainly interesting. I haven't seen much fanfiction centering around the wolf side of things, rather than the vampire side of things. Let's see...I really enjoyed how you set scenes, although you could use a little variance in your sentence structure as you do that. Another suggestion I would have would be to let the reader develop their own opinion a bit more - you tell us a lot of details that a reader could interpret through a more indirect style of characterization. Your pace, mostly through use of excellently written dialogue, works very well with the plot you've developed. Overall I think it's a story with a lot of promise! Keep writing it.
    Happy Mibbaween!
    October 6th, 2014 at 12:30am
  • samlovesmusic

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    I cant wait till you update.
    January 24th, 2014 at 02:42pm
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    Cannot wait till you update!
    December 24th, 2013 at 07:52pm
  • Dramadiva916

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    Please update
    March 26th, 2013 at 05:14am
  • Merida

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    :C I miss this!
    January 24th, 2013 at 05:29am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Are you going to update this story soon? :) I miss it.
    December 7th, 2012 at 10:10pm
  • RKOforlife01

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    plz update soon love! <3 luv da story :)
    November 22nd, 2012 at 03:56am
  • c u next tuesday

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    I'm not usually into Twilight stuff, but girl. this is good.

    update ASAP xoxo
    November 13th, 2012 at 10:22am
  • grayson;

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    Can I say how much I love this story?! Its wonderful and I'm falling in love. Haha. Please! Please! Please, update soon. (:
    October 11th, 2012 at 12:48am
  • Patrick Sharp

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    UPDATE SOON! ):

    I miss this story so much.

    Image
    August 7th, 2012 at 06:07am
  • Merida

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    I love this! Update soon please. :)
    August 3rd, 2012 at 07:04pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    This story is da balm. :)
    I love this, Amelia is amazing. I love her character. When will she meet Paul in his human form? I cannot wait for the next chapter.
    Please update soon?
    July 30th, 2012 at 04:54pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Yays! You updated!! Ty! Def cant wait for more! <3 this story..
    July 30th, 2012 at 04:23am
  • icanread29

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    Love the story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!
    July 25th, 2012 at 10:03pm
  • Patrick Sharp

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    This was too cute! I loved how she was feeding him and how she was trying to figure out if he was a male or female. This is seriously the most adorable chapter ever!

    Update soon! I missed this story so much.
    July 24th, 2012 at 12:25am
  • notllamadelrey

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    AH! when are you going to have Amelia and Paul meet? This story is really cute, the way Amelia lets her guard down and all.
    July 22nd, 2012 at 09:01pm
  • andrea.howls

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    Aww <3 This was a cute chapter
    July 22nd, 2012 at 03:37pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Pretty good start to a story.. Hope u continue soon.
    July 11th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • katreena

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    this is really good so far , I hope you update soon :]
    June 16th, 2012 at 05:45pm
  • Bluecaty15

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    i absolutely love it!!! please update again soon!
    June 15th, 2012 at 12:08am