Just Skin and Bone - Comments

"I thought you told me you put her back." all I could think about was 'Back where?' and then I kept reading, you know those internet meme "When you See it" yeah totally had one of those moments. and when Mr.James said "Do not talk that way about my Mary-Ann." I laughed so hard. the statement about Mr.James not liking his wife's perfume, brought me back to how insane the poor old coot really was.

In short, Almost as brilliant as Stephen King this story was.

I can honestly say I've never read anything like this, ahah. But in a good way! The summary was just amazing. I thought Mr. James was so sweet in the beginning, but then I got to where his wife had been dead for two years, and I was "ooooooooh...." The only thing I took issue with was the verb tenses. Some were in the past, some were in the present. But I loved how descriptive you are. [:

So fucking sorry it took me forever to read this, but I am so fucking happy I did. This was AMAZING. You had great details and told Mr. James story so well. This was definately a creepy story, but it was written very well. I'm gonna subscribe to it, so it's just a click away when I wanna read it again. LOVED IT! :D

And I loved how Mr. James thought it was perfectly sane to keep his soiled wife in his bed XD

That was creepy, but a good kind. Mr. James surly did love his wife, and that's sweet:) But, I think the poor guy took it too far. Good story, I LOVED it:D

sweet, in a creepy kinda way

When I first read it (the song) I thought that was it...then I noticed the story was on the next page...ANYWAYS lol This was really good! It was chilling and odd...BUT in a good way! I love the way you put the lyrics into the story as well, it was a nice touch. I also liked the layout very much, But the bann was the fave! At first i was like ewwwww but then I read the story and understood why you choose that picture!

Anyways I loved it. amazing job!

PS sorry for spelling, I'm crazy tierd and I'm typing to fast lol =)

This was haunting. A good read, and I loved it! At first I was wondering about this part of the lyrics: A cross between spoiled milk, moldy bread, and rotten pears. I was thinking, "Who makes that type of perfume?" Then everything cleared up as I read through the story. I read this in a painstakingly slow manner because I wanted to savour it. Too good, too good ;-P

This is...wow. It's really good. The layout is simple, but really good, and the banner is pretty creepy but fitting :D Your details are very nice, and I think the plot is very unique and creative.

Mr. James is a crazy guy!! Who keeps their wife in their bed when they're DEAD? Ugh. That's gross. Aha. You're very descriptive and I really like this story(: Write more freaky stories!

That was an intense summary, I just read it and was like WHOA! after i finished reading it.

I can tell from the first paragraph you have a way of describing things, I love the way you described his hair that was just really cool...lol...I feel like I'm reading a book because it's very smooth and polished. Oh and I'm commenting as I read, just so ya know. And I'm liking the way it's write.

Clean and Crisp.

As I continue you I find myself becoming more into the story, it's very good and has a nice way of hooking people.

Oh goodness, Mr. James is insane...well I mean I understand it, but it's like yikes what have you done. The poor old man and I can only imagine Harry's reaction...cause in my mind it's very freaked.

It's a freaky love story, that's a new twist I like it. It's giving me chills, I could only imagine how one would react in such a situation, I mean getting her out and it's been a year and a half...that's just crazy.

The ending line, actually the last few chapters were just so horrific, but perfect for the story. This is definitely a different story and I was very impressed with how well written it is. Honestly, great work here.

This gave me the chills in a good. :) good