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  • beside.these.eyes

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    its definitely not where i would have taken the story of the song (im guessing a day late by anberlin) but it was really good and really moving.
    i think its really relatable to any people who have or will read this :]
    August 7th, 2011 at 03:35am
  • Whatchamacallit

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    OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I STILL LOVE IT!
    and i feel like im going to cry sometimes from it. but its amazing!
    February 21st, 2008 at 03:23am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    that is really, really great. whoever is judging the contest would be crazy to not consider that as a winner. it's so wonderful.
    i like the way you began with the letter, and the letter in turn let us know exactly the relationship is that you have with blake, but also not giving too many details. i also like how you didn't go on about hating the girl he was with. you said it was only a matter of time until she saw in blake what you see everyday, and that was really beautiful. you left it at that instead of going on about how sluttly her outfit is or how horrible her hair looked... you had an innocent thought which still made me, the reader, love you until the very end.
    this is really wonderful and i hope it does great in the contest!
    February 21st, 2008 at 01:35am
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