The Beast and the Harlot - Comments

very interseting.....in a good way lol

Very unique. I've never read anything like this. I definitely enjoyed this. Thanks for entering

well first of all, i want to say this was freaking great. the banner and layout were both amazing. the thing that i loved the most was how it was different than most stories. in most stories i read it's all about romance and just mushy stuff, but in this they were in hell instead of a hotel room. and the fact that basically the whole thing is the Rev trying to get an army, then at the very end you include how Vaughnette, love that name btw, wants to still be his harlot was romantic to me, i have no clue why. there was like one grammar mistake, no big deal. but it was fantastic. good luck in the contest and r.i.p Rev. </3