Never Coming Home. - Comments

Aw wow, I don't think it was rambling at all. It was amazing! It was so sad, and again, your description is amazing. Loved it!

short and un-judged*

okay, this was AMAZING. it left me speechless, so this comment will probably short un-judged. so i'm sorry if it is. anyway, i loveloveloved the layout, it was cute and it fit the story. i also loved how you included a summary. there were no grammar mistakes that i noticed and you gave details, but not so many that it bore me. i had tears starting to form when it ended, i loved how you didn't include that they were famous at all. for some reason it reminded me of the movie pearl harbor, okay, now i'm babbling. anyway, it was a great entry, you're very talented at writing and good luck in the contest. :D