Wrestled Thoughts - Comments

I miss this story :(

First, I think your banner and layout are amazing!
I love how simple they are, but they still draw your attention, which is awesome!
I think it's a little weird that Ronnie is suddenly infatuated with Ivy, but hey, whatever works. They seem cute. I don't normally read fanfiction, but I even think that if you changed the names, like if you wanted to publish it or whatever, you could do that no problem.

I love how you made Ronnie a cocky jerk. lol! "I'm naturally beautiful, what the hell are you talking about?" I laughed because I thought 'That sounds exactly like something he would say' I like Ivy and how she seems so innocent and stuff. I was sad when Ivy left because Ronnie was late. Poor Ronnie you shouldn't have been late huh? Good job and please keep going

Victoria likey. I'm a huge Ronnie Radke fan and I like the fact that they're both outgoing and smoothe talking characters. I'm really excited as to where you'll take this. Will Ivy give him another chance? Hmmm

I bumped into this by going to your profile and I really like it. It's well written and it draws you in. The banner is lovely and I love the layout. Your writing, both of your writing, is simply amazing. You have a way of leaving us wanting more and it's great. I feel bad for Ivy. Ronnie is kind of funny. I don't know why but every story he's in he's a little cute dork.

I fell asleep.

haha, that made my day. This is a great story and so I will subscribe. I'm gonna continue reading this so continue writing.

I need another chapter =O ! I really do

Awh, poor Ivy. :(
Ronnie's a dumbass. But then again, he is male. It's to be expected.
I seriously hope you guys update this really soon.
I love it.
xx

C'mooonnn. Please? x)

I am already in love with this story.
It seems fantastic, and the plot already has my attention.
I can't wait to read the second chapter and see where this goes.
I'm definitely subscribing. :))

I enjoyed this a lot. It's great to see a fan-fiction where the people in it seem like normal human beings.

The layout is beautiful, and Ivy's character intrigues me.

Can't wait to see more! :)

Great start! :)
I haven't read anyone Ronnie Radke fics before but i had some odd dream and he was in it the other night so i decided it was about time i read one haha
Why not?
Can't wait to see where you guys take it from here
Update soon! :P

First off, the banner and layout are AWESOME. The banner is absolutely amazing (minus one teeny tiny grammar mistake), but that doesn't take away from how beautiful it is.

Anywho, I've never read a Ronnie story, but I must say I'm already intrigued. :) Ivy is mysterious indeed, and I always enjoy stories that keep some elements of reality in them (in this case, Ronnie's legal issues).

So I'm subscribing. Well done, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

^I didn't mean for the double post. >_<

I love the lay out. It’s nice and simple. :)

This is funny but cute and I can definitely imagine this whole thing in my head. I love your descriptions and the portrayal of Ronnie and Ivy’s emotions. Your grammar and spelling were perfect too.

It’s funny and a relief to see a story where a girl isn’t swooning over a rock star. XD

This is a good start and I really loved Ivy’s somewhat mysterious character. Seriously, I do. LOL. I can’t wait to read more. :3

I love the lay out. It’s nice and simple. :)

This is funny but cute and I can definitely imagine this whole thing in my head. I love your descriptions and the portrayal of Ronnie and Ivy’s emotions. Your grammar and spelling were perfect too.

It’s funny and a relief to see a story where a girl isn’t swooning over a rock star. XD

This is a good start and I really loved Ivy’s somewhat mysterious character. Seriously, I do. LOL. I can’t wait to read more. :3

Layout

The layout is gorgeous. The banner is just as beautiful! So far, that gets a A++

Summary

I like how you kept it short and sweet. You gave a detail of each main character, that is wonderful. I like how you kept a little bit of Ronnie's real life in it. Gives it more of a edge. That was very good. I love the ending of the disclaimer. It's hilarious xD

Chapter One

First of all I got to say I love how you did not make him seem vain. Most stories the rockstar is like, "I'm so hot. Date me bitch." It's wonderful how you did not do that here. I really like how you added all the dialogue, it made it so realistic. I also love how you used this word, "infatuated." I don't know why, but I do. This story was actually a good read. Better than most of the fan-fictions on Mibba. You actually added class to the story. I enjoy that. I'm going to sub. to this story, I'm curious on what you are going to come up with. Very good work, to the both of you:)