Ok... I noticed that there are PLENTY typos in chapter 6. I apologize I typed it up at 4 in the morning, when I was done, I was sleepy and I didn't feel like proofreading, I know, shitty excuse, but please bare with me... btw... I have 2 subscribers now! Thanks for subscribing whoever you are! :)
Cheating is a no-no Ginger. haha love the update. Love the song playlist too. Awesome choices. 'Remebering Sunday' is one of my faves. :) Can't wait for the next update! <3
This is very cute :) I love Jonathan's lil cameo haha. (wonder why...ahem lol) Poor Austin, he could never be invisible. :) I can't wait to see how things between Calea and Caleb blossom. Look forward to when they go back to camp. Update soon :)
awww your writing reminds me of the way i wrote when i was your age! xD lots of dialogue, not enough description. gotta find a balance, which i know is pretty difficult. i'm a total grammar nazi, so i think you should watch your grammar/spelling/punctuation. lol. so, yeah, basically, more description and improve your mechanics. your content's fine... just keep writing, you'll get better at it the more you practice! i love caleb turman x3