Just a Phone Call Away - Comments

  • BarakittyLover

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    Loooooove this!
    March 28th, 2012 at 09:16am
  • kawaii panda--xx

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    omg yay! i missed this story! thank god drew is out of the picture. i want a buddy like cameron! lol woo can't wait for more!
    March 10th, 2012 at 08:46am
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    Ok... I noticed that there are PLENTY typos in chapter 6.
    I apologize I typed it up at 4 in the morning, when I was done, I was sleepy and I didn't feel like proofreading, I know, shitty excuse, but please bare with me... btw... I have 2 subscribers now! Thanks for subscribing whoever you are! :)
    January 21st, 2012 at 09:19pm
  • kawaii panda--xx

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    Hurricane Hayley!!!!! Sorry just had to put that out there for some reason. Love triangle eh? This is gettin interesting! :D
    January 21st, 2012 at 10:48am
  • kawaii panda--xx

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    Cheating is a no-no Ginger. haha love the update. Love the song playlist too. Awesome choices. 'Remebering Sunday' is one of my faves. :) Can't wait for the next update! <3
    November 29th, 2011 at 06:19am
  • kawaii panda--xx

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    This is very cute :) I love Jonathan's lil cameo haha. (wonder why...ahem lol) Poor Austin, he could never be invisible. :) I can't wait to see how things between Calea and Caleb blossom. Look forward to when they go back to camp. Update soon :)
    November 19th, 2011 at 06:28pm
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    thanks.. and i wrote this a wile ago so it's not as good as i write now...
    November 3rd, 2011 at 10:56pm
  • My Wayward Son

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    awww your writing reminds me of the way i wrote when i was your age! xD
    lots of dialogue, not enough description. gotta find a balance, which i know is pretty difficult.
    i'm a total grammar nazi, so i think you should watch your grammar/spelling/punctuation. lol.
    so, yeah, basically, more description and improve your mechanics. your content's fine...
    just keep writing, you'll get better at it the more you practice! i love caleb turman x3
    November 3rd, 2011 at 05:17pm