please update!
January 3rd, 2012 at 12:39pm
Like You and I are Finally Gonna get it Right - Comments
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I like it!November 28th, 2011 at 06:11am
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Awww!!!! That was so sweet of Alex! :) I love it! Update soon!!!August 14th, 2011 at 09:34pm
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Poor Cam...Alex seems to be the only one giving her a breakAugust 13th, 2011 at 08:24pm
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your story does not suck...they just dont know a good story..im liking this oneAugust 11th, 2011 at 05:43am
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i love it!
update soon?(:August 9th, 2011 at 08:45pm -
i love this story. please keep writing(:August 6th, 2011 at 09:57pm
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Ohyeah I would luv it if you kept writingAugust 6th, 2011 at 07:24am
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I like that Alex can read her like a book and even though she 'hates' him it's helped her lolAugust 6th, 2011 at 07:23am
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I love It! Keep writing. :)August 4th, 2011 at 05:52am
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this shit is beautifulJuly 22nd, 2011 at 07:48am
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Oh please, your story does not suck. They're just missing out :-)) Keep up with what your doing. You gain some and lose some:)). But I like it a lot!!!July 22nd, 2011 at 07:37am
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Shweeeet update:))))July 21st, 2011 at 03:24am
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I loveeee this.July 19th, 2011 at 06:24am
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You have to update soooooooon:-)July 19th, 2011 at 03:20am
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This seeeems awesome:)
Also, I like her POV because it's her thoughts. (:July 18th, 2011 at 07:19am -
No keep using "I" I like it in her pov. Lol, but gaaah this is so interesting! Alex is such a butt sfhsjfsfh I can't wait for more.July 18th, 2011 at 06:42am
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I like this so far. :)
The story has my attention and kept me interested through the reading. The concept also is starting off very differently which I like. And I really liked the word choices you used,
One suggestion from me is trying to limit the number of times you start sentences off with saying "I".
But the story is great. :)July 18th, 2011 at 05:20am -
Awww i absolutely love it! But damn it Matt, I don't like him right now.July 18th, 2011 at 05:02am
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I love this story!July 16th, 2011 at 07:47am
