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  • asiul.marie1012

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    I would too if I was her ;/
    October 23rd, 2011 at 08:03am
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    wow, no more ballet. i would die if i was her
    October 23rd, 2011 at 06:31am
  • WannaBeFree

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    What a fucking... I can't even process my emotions... Grr... That was a great chapter and I've been missing this story so I' happy it's back. That was a short comment but I must go. Thanks for that, update as soon as you can.
    October 1st, 2011 at 04:11am
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    They're getting married... Not sure how I feel about that. Still mulling it over. I think his sister seems a lot like Aimee. Is it just me? Oh well. That was really good. I missed this story. I have severe writers block on everything that I have written and I keep having these half done one-shots or chapters and it's horrible. But anywhore, I'm glad you got that out because I've been waiting for an update on this. Continue as soon as you can please!
    September 18th, 2011 at 05:18am
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    Aww, too cute! I'm glad you updated again. I'm also very afraid that I'm going to cry during the next chapter. She has issues with her stomach too... Well, that didn't suck and thanks for putting up another chapter.
    August 17th, 2011 at 12:27am
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    Wow. I love how he "broke up" with Aimee. Please update!!!
    August 5th, 2011 at 08:21am
  • asiul.marie1012

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    haha thanks, I'm still trying to figure it out too! Check out my new story I just started it yesterday :)
    July 30th, 2011 at 07:50pm
  • WannaBeFree

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    I really have no clue what to do next in this. All I know is that I really like it.
    July 30th, 2011 at 07:44pm
  • asiul.marie1012

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    it's ok :D I will soon! haha
    July 27th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • WannaBeFree

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    Sorry, I meant Samuel! Honest mistake, I just really wish she was with Demetri. Great chapter. Please continue soon!
    July 27th, 2011 at 05:24am
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    samuel? Oh man, you'll see. Amber isn't a slut, neither
    July 26th, 2011 at 10:16pm
  • WannaBeFree

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    Why oh why did she say yes to Demetri? And also, if your character thinks she's a slut for liking two guys at the same time, what does that make Amber?
    July 26th, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • WannaBeFree

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    THAT'S ME!!!!! Oh my god! I flipped when I saw that. Maybe it's because I'm a dork. Anyways, that was great. the outfits were great and I think her friend is Demetri. That's just my guess. Fantastic chapter, please update soon!
    July 23rd, 2011 at 10:24pm
  • WannaBeFree

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    I love it. I was disappointed when she said yes to Samuel but if it adds drama, I love it. Demetri's grilfriend is horrible and I love that too! Please update soon!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 10:20pm
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    i like the name demetri and whats etoile? i saw the video. i was just speechless.
    July 21st, 2011 at 07:29am
  • asiul.marie1012

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    she's evil x)
    July 21st, 2011 at 06:46am
  • WannaBeFree

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    His girlfriend is a b****! I love it!!!
    July 21st, 2011 at 06:44am
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    Aww. That's cute!
    July 20th, 2011 at 07:15pm
  • asiul.marie1012

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    She was really angry at him. You'll see in the next chapter what's the reason for him asking like that.
    July 19th, 2011 at 08:03pm
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    Was she really angry at him? Or was she just messing around?
    July 19th, 2011 at 10:32am
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