Free Pass - Comments

It would be unfair of me to just read this and not comment, sooo ... I liked it. :) I'm not really a fan of Stiles with a male partner, but you wrote it undeniably well. Good job on this one! It was very enjoyable.

THAT. WAS. SO. GOOD.

Seriously. Just. I don't know where to start.

Okay, so Stiles was the cutest, most adorable ball of fluff I've ever read about and just. D'AWW. HE WAS SO CUTE. And so in character. I could picture him perfectly with his smart ass remarks and just... He was so wonderful to read about, and you portrayed him so well, and he's the best, and I love him.

And then there's Matt who is just so fantastic and great. Like, he was such a BAMF, sexy ass, tough, swaggered out master. I love how you made him. So in control and tough and fantastic. :inlove He was so perfect for this situation. Like, I loved his dominance, it was amazing. I could picture him perfectly as well. :D

AND THEN THE STORY ITSELF.

No words. None. Nada. I seriously... will try to situate my thoughts for you. Okay, so like, the beginning was so lovely. I adored it. Like, the atmosphere you set up was so realistic and just perfect, and yeah. Good stuff, good stuff. And then that transformed into the steamiest, most schmexy atmosphere ever. XD

Like, it was brilliant. The entire time I was chomping down on my brownie mix all wide eyed. It was so flawlessly written and was just a joy to read. I absolutely loved it. Like, maybe I should try and comment on this some other time when I can think straight so my comment doesn't suck. XD

It was so magnificent. I loved it more than anything. It was fantastic. I'm going to read it forever and ever. It was perfect. :weird

I JUST LOVED IT SO MUCH IT KILLS ME.