Life of Illusion - Comments

Hmm this slightly sounds like that relapse thing I was talking about. Oh, and I called the Phelps twins. They told me everything. :) Update asap.

This story is brilliant :D I just recently became obsessed with Oliver and James, so this is perfect! And, a really great twist with the drug and alcohol thing..I start school in exactly a week, too...ughh..anyway, please update :)

I got the easy A reference as well! Haha I hope she doesn't relapse. Update soon!

I love this :D I can already kinda picture the coffe shop!!
I didn't get the hints. I'm not really good at those type of things.
But I did get the Easy A reference.
It's one of my all time favorite movied ever :D

Poop.
If those 'hints' had anything to do with her past...
I think I have an idea of what's going down :/

But great chapter anyway (:
Interior design... lawlz .

Lol James and Oliver Phelps- interior designs extraordinairs (or however it's spelled) xD
I smell jealousy, Mr. James. O:
I wanna read more ^-^

I loved the new updates! They were really really good!

I like this however I must point out a a few things:
1) The Phelps twins are brunettes, they dyed their hair ginger!
2) They call it a 'malt', Horlicks just happens to be a brand of malt, not the name they use.
3) Since you're an American using English terms for the other characters' speech maybe hire a few English movies and read a few English novels based in modern times, some of the speech doesn't come off how I think you intend it to.
Other than that it's quite good. I look forward to more!

James is getting a little jealous!! Someone has a crush ;)
it's cute XD
I can't wait for the next chapter :D

It's almost sad how excited I was when I
got the update notification for this story .
But hey, when James and Oliver are
involved, I get a little... O.o

I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!

James is getting jealous!! ^_^
I love this story!! I don't think I can express that enough :)

Hang on, what book did you title Star Dust after ?
I thought it was one of the Stargirl books, 'cause it had that part
where they make up life stories for strangers they see in public places
like the engaged old lady and the pretend magician .
At least, I think Stargirl's what it was from . It's been a while .

OOOOO James is jealousssss O:
that's so cute ^-^ hehe
I can't wait to read more :D

I kind of really really like this story :D
Scratch that, I freakin' love it, it's amazing .
Love Aline's character; very unique and easy to relate to .
Great job writing ! Keep it up ' xo

I liked this chapter. And I feel lame for not completely getting that. I thought a couple of those sounded familiar, but I didn't get Alice in Wonderland out of those. The only one that was three words was the first one and The Great Move doesn't connect to Alice in Wonderland to me at all.

Yay :) I picked up on the lameness...lmao it just comes naturally to me :3
I love this update and I can't wait for the next one. I hope you feel better!!

I love this!! I just started reading it and I'm so happy that there is finally a story about these two that doesn't pertain to Harry Potter. And I think that I know what you're dong with the chapter titles. You're taking book names and replacing words with your own, right? I think that's right...inpicked up on Alice in Wonderland and The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe. I'm so proud of myself :D

I looooooooved the updates. And for the chapter titles, I was going to say something like the first letter of each word in the title was the same initial of a book title, but I can't think of what they would be, so either I'm wrong, or I'm not looking in the correct books, or using too many initials.

Loved the update ^-^ lol horlicks, tis a funny word o:
can't wait to read more ^-^
Oh, and James was adorable in this chapter omg OwO