First thing first. I really like X-men. And it is difficult to find any on here. Especially one that is well written. So bonus points already. I like the way you get into the characters heads and that you chose to write this a year after the crisis in order to do something new with the characters instead of a novelization of the movie. The only thing I would suggest is making Erik a lot more bitter. And remember that he is an anti villain. He is a villain that does stuff that is wrong but you have general sympathy for him. Overall I really liked it and I hope you update it again because it was good!
March 30th, 2012 at 07:34pm