Black Magic - Comments

Hope your still continuing this story! It's so good

Very beautifully written, I love the story! :) <3 Please update this soon :D

So I know you haven't updated this for a while but it's fantastic, albeit a little twisted, and i'm totally in love with it so you should do so asap. I promise to comment, I promise promise promise! It was exactly what I was looking for today :)

Beautifully written. I can't help but be so taken by his charms! But I feel so sorry for her haha. Update! :)

I really like this story!
Hope you get a chance to update it soon!

I love this. I really enjoy how you can tell he's an evil bastard, but she can't, not really, not yet. Bwahahhaa. I love your representation of him. Nom.

Okay, this one slightly confused me. So, Tom brought Millie away from the castle and the reason he was zipping his trousers up afterwards was because he had sex with her... Yes?
Either way, it was so beautifully written that I was in awe the whole time. Can't wait for more.

so adorable.

Love it :)

Wow! Love the layout!
And another brilliant update, as usual.
Thanks for mentioning me ;)

Oh, I forgot to mention. I love the new layout. <3

So again, amazing. Tom's up to something, lol, but I love how you kept his personality intact. He comes off as charming to almost everyone and smooths over moments when his true personality shines. Well done!

I quite like this story.

Okay... I've only commented twice before, haha.

This is written so beautifully. I know I've commented quite a few times before, but I truly am in love with this story!
I'm intrigued and inspired, and can't wait to read more!

AHHH. I'm in love. DEFINITELY subscribing...PLEASE update as soon as you can! I loveeee loveee loveee your portrayal of Tom Riddle..<3

Shivers down my spine. Is it possible to fall in love with a fictional character? Can't wait for more.

Update Soon please?

Ellie,

XD

Goodness. This is absolutely amazing!
I, like you, am very intrigued in the young Tom Riddle, but my portrayal of him was much different to yours. It's nice to see a different approach to the young Tom and I am definitely subscribing!!

Another comment, yay! I have to say I love this story. Not entirely sure where you're going with it but I love the way you write. There's so much detail without focusing on what she's wearing (which I always find unnecessary but oddly...whatever). Anyway, I wasn't sure why Louisiana and Millie started to argue like that. It was weird. Maybe because you didn't exactly start at the beginning or anything, but it is a very well-written story. One that I hope gets updated soon?