This is really good - I liked the language used, and it was really sad when she started to realise that she had wasted her life getting drunk and taking drugs when she could have been out doing other things. I particularly liked the end; I thought the short sentences, each on their own line, were really effective, and I also really liked the final line. Although nothing actually happened there, I felt it was a good way to finish the story off.
September 24th, 2011 at 05:01pm